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“Any sufficiently analyzed magic is indistinguishable from science.” - Girl Genius, by Kaja & Phil Foglio

"Any sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic." - Arthur C. Clarke

Perspective, it's all about perspective ...

13 March 2013

Isabel and the Grenade

Here's another piece of short fiction, this one written for the Library writing group homework.  We were instructed to write an opening sentence, then to pass it to the person next to us!  We were also to include some reference(s) to spring (the season).  Total length of no more than 500 words.

The opening line was written by Jeff.  The rest is my fault.

Isabel and the Grenade

Isabel pulled the pin on the hand grenade and slipped it into the library's book drop.  She ran like hell down the curve of the driveway.  Please work, please work.  Someone found a cache of old weapons and brought them to Michael, who'd scratched his head through the short grey bristle he called hair and declared them salvageable. 

She dove in front of the large brick sign that announced to the dictator-crushed world this was the Greater Metro Library, landed sprawling across bright pink tulips as the serenity of the spring morning was shattered.  Fragments from what was now a hole Josh could drive his Hummer through pattered down around her.  A smokey dust cloud followed.  Isabel lurched to her feet, staggered to the sidewalk, turned to gape at the damage and tried to look surprised, not elated.  It worked!  

As she steadied her footing and tossed long blond curls from her face, the black Hummer barreled past and did indeed fit into the opening she'd made for it.  A pipe of some kind scraped along one side, but Josh, Gerson, Kiko, Michael and Shelby were in.  She heard glass shatter as Josh accelerated through the lobby doors on the way to the conference room where there was an oh-so-secret meeting with The Dictator Himself, the Ministers of War and Economy, and the heads of agencies everyone knew existed but didn't dare mention.

Isabel held her breath.  The rattle of the AK 47s sounded distant, like old videos, like toys.  The screams, as short as they were, tore into her chest.  She fell to her knees, head hanging, fingers grasping the moist soil.  Why did it hurt, hearing the monsters die?  Gasping, retching, struggling to breath, she felt large hands grab her shoulders.  She was hauled upright.  Forced around.  The security guard kept one hand painfully gripping her shoulder.  The other held a gun to her temple.

"At this range it'll kill you," he said conversationally.

She swallowed hard, feeling if her eyes opened any wider they'd fall out of her head.  The guard's grey eyes darted from her face to the library.  He shook her, as if that would help her ragged breathing.

The Hummer should be coming back out.  If ... There it was.  The growl of the powerful engine.

Isabel folded her knees, slumped straight down as if she'd fainted.  The guard swore.  A single gun shot and he no longer had a face.  Isabel screamed as she was covered with his blood.

"Bel!  Bel!"  Gerson was half out the side door, one arm extended.  She stumbled, leaped, and hit him hard, both of them tumbling into the Hummer.  Shelby's long arm hauled the door closed as Josh gunned the engine. 

She looked around at the grinning faces.

The opening salvo of the Spring Revolt was theirs.

6 comments:

Jeff Segal said...

Of course I've had my frustrations with the writers' support group at the Vernon library, but I don't recall ever weighing a paramilitary strike when there was still vodka in the freezer.

Kat said...

LOL Yes, vodka helps.

You handed me a live grenade! I had to come up with some reason to blow a hole in the wall. It's a fantastic opening line. I'll keep it in mind as an example if we ever have to do this sort of thing again.

Carol Keene said...

I LOVE your story AND Jeff's comment about it.

Anonymous said...

And library was in the first line too! What's a girl to do...

Richard

Kat said...

I know, right?

Kat said...

Thanks, Carol!